Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, May 2, 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Brooke
ReplyDeleteI like how you cut out two of them and one was singing at a time it was really cool.Maybe next time you could add more beats more than eliminating beats.great job keep up the work.
thanks
Deletekia ora Brooke, i love it. i like the way you made most of them have a turn next time you could make it a bit longer and let all of them have a turn. you could have a description to make it even better.
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