Thursday, April 16, 2020
Lockdown writing
Hey, bloggers, this is my first online learning blog post I hope you enjoy. We had to watch an animation and describe the Instructions of how they made the doll, How do you think they would make a wooden doll? I hope you enjoy.
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Hi Brooke, I had no idea how to make a wooden doll so you taught me something. It might be easier to read if you list the instructions by numbering them and using connectives such as next, lastly etc. I love how you included the video that his activity was based on. Great job!
ReplyDeleteHi Brooke, when I started reading your Lockdown writing I thought perhaps you knew a very technical way to make a wooden doll! But as I read on I realised you were writing instructions based on the animation...nice one. I agree with Ms Catton, perhaps next time you could add connectives like first, then, furthermore so the instructions are clear. Thanks for including the animation so I could watch that too!
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